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The Eskimo and the fish (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

From the safety of a smoky dome He drags his life through the whiteness of time. To auger breifly into another world and sit fishing with intense interest. Peering into the water he chants: Ocean waters deep and cold what is said is what is told. I love my life from wife to land seems but paltry within my hand. The Inuit retrieves a spotted char Then slowly traces its teeth marked flesh He chants again: Small of fish bruised and burled I wish you well in your hasty world I asked the oceans deep and cold your harried life is what they showed. Then relinquishes it to its home. Again the empty line descends and quickly lands a heartier meal. The man bundles his tools and smiles at his catch and hurriedly returns to his family who expect nothing more.

powerline 31-Dec-02/7:17 PM
There is a lot more in this that needs to be brought out. You've come on the idea of man and his role with nature, as providor and as his own master. Lots to swallow, but somewhere in these is the essence of what you were after.




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