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Things (Free verse) by Quarton

Off the assembly line they role, bicycles and washing machines, lawn mowers and airplanes; manufactured in an endless variety of inanimate things. But when did a chicken or steer, a lamb or a hog, become merely an object, an unfeeling and unaware thing? Factory farming, growth hastened to maturity--hormone creativity; unnatural lives confined--defined, from birth to ignoble death. Amidst the mayhem of the cutter's knife, animal cries--bewildered eyes; maximum profit mentality--reality; indifferent to the difference between a lamb and a shovel-- a bleat or a scrape. Newborn calves isolated--violated, destined to die when three months old, throats slit hanging upside down. Unintended mercy--culpability; veal all that remains to justify the pain. Does the tender pink flesh lessen the suffering, do we compliment the chef? Inhumanity served medium rare. Animals possess rights beyond human selection or rejection; though we as a species create misery in denial of shared presence--essence; with impunity and separate from the system we all share. Our common bond trivialized--unrealized as by virtue of no virtue; altruism viewed with open disdain--in vain. While the cruelty continues unabated--unsatiated tho all life related; animals alive and sentient yet demeaned and mistreated, abused and confused, crying out thing--machine.

poetandknowit 27-Dec-02/11:18 PM
How exactly does it reflect a bias and a bias of what? I was suggesting a fine book that deals with the meat industry in ways that are quite original and thought provoking. As far as the other, maybe you have not read Pete Singer, which is odd if you are a proponent of this sort of thinking. Hmmm. That would explain that. It is not in TN, it is in MI and it is quite an interesting place if you ever get a chance to visit. Look, the poem may appeal to a certain sect of the population, which can use it for their propaganda, but as poetry it is sap. Do you think I was serious about the mantra bit? It was a humorous allegory. Geez. I gave you a zero because I have heard all of this said exactly this way. I want to read something thought provoking or genuinely emotional. Resorting to general themes of this issue just are not going to do it.




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