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close to you and can't be still (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil

close to you and can't be still have to hum around you are the swing you are the spin the sky rolls and the clouds are ground and everything unfastened rains down you keep me on my feet dancing inside my shoes singing into my hands billboards that's what i want postage stamps that's what i have

zapevaj 26-Jun-02/1:55 AM
I don't get the last stanza, but the rest is great. The first stanza has a wonderful rhythm.




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