Caducus18 Dec 2002

Doubt you'll even see this comment, hope so as I've grafted on this work of yours.

I think a poem of chess is a good subject and this could benefit as GW suggested from maybe a metaphor like 'Royal blood drips from its master, drier than the falling sand, Pawns in numbers advance, Kings remain seated, armies depleted, Death begins the devils dance, Black and white combat, so true to life, inconclusive, slain to the rhythm of superior thought.

Well that took 5 mins and its a bit messed up but hope i may have helped.