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every bite remembers in my skin (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil

every bite remembers in my skin the mouth of your's, your lips, your teeth, your tongue plunging like my flesh is cream. now they whisper in my neck and chest and arms when you come close. i could forget with time and others but for the reminding i receive from every point you touched. they can only remember, in a chorus of small desires that you planted and i carry.

razorgrin 20-Jun-02/9:01 AM
I really enjoy the beginning.The "Reminding" is a bit...eh, but this is nice.




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