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just another punk song (Free verse) by darby pyn

The night before was a dense dream full with the taste of gasoline. blood on the concrete, the morning after, I can't remember, another disaster. memories spill like a broken vow. pulls you down from your pedestal to a bow. in servitude with no strength for defiance, inanimate objects, another appliance. braille for fingers. speak with touch. a silent conversation below the clutch. subversive thoughts are free to shout. ignite the gasoline than spit it out.

darby pyn 5-Dec-02/9:19 AM
PAKI I'm not trying to sway anyone to a certain style or
atitude about punk. the title is a rip off of a bad brains
song " just another dam song ". it's just a screw work
poem, song I wrote at work. I was bored. I do have
more deep poems more abstract. but this is not one of them.
I hope you liked it for what it is. gabba gabba hey.




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