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Chilling Out (Free verse) by Goose

In the den watching T.V. or listening to music Nirvana cd or maybe the White Stripes but for some reason your friend finds Jack creepy so you have to sneak them in the player when he is not looking and you're all high as a kite and no one's cooking so you pick up the phone and ring Dominoes while your friends sing and laugh and play spades and forget the day that's past and you all try not knowing that the world is flowing just outside the door and you are all kids no longer no more

Caducus 5-Dec-02/5:28 AM
You should carry this on more it ends to abruptly, this could be promising so kick this back in there, the 3 votes a bit out of order -6-




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