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On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday (Free verse) by poetandknowit

I realize I will no longer look at her the same, although she still skips from the school door, now she can dress on her own, smile with different meanings, brush her own hair.

Nicholas Monson 3-Dec-02/1:43 PM
Come on. You can do better than this. You have got us going and then suddenly it's finished. You express yourself so well and we want more. And in this poem less is definiotely not more..




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