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Whispers of the Night (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

Footsteps in the hallway A door openeth Then closeth The flick of a switch And a shuffling of feet Then the wond'rous sound Of bountiful flesh As it meets a porcelain realm A brief pause A wail Then still The air is brown with sound.

Poetie 7-Jun-02/12:00 PM
This has the feel of Edgar Allen Poe's The Tell-Tale heart. for some twisted reason, I like the mysterious feel to your poem.




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