Caducus27 Nov 2002

You replied - thanks

noW down to business ! As it stands it needs a better conclusion, when you say in the last line 'i can look at myself again' try and add a connection, such as this....
in a shattered mirror of disfigurement.
A shattered mirror is supposedly bad luck, and shattered metaphorically recognizes you as the one shattered, reflected by the cracks as a broken spirit, lots of different people of which you dont recognize any, as you changed from the pain your ex caused you.
It was just one idea out of many you could create.
I'm learning too, just dont want to see a good beginning have no end