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Sisters in Disquise (Free verse) by confuzdlilgirl

You are my right hand A sister in disguise I know what you mean I'm not blind behind these eyes You are my best friend We will and always will be Through thick and thin Together you and me I know that you'll always be near Even if we grow apart Because no matter what comes Memories will never part We have our differences It's obvious to all on the side But we take the others shit And we do it with pride I never thought I would Come to find a girl That felt just how I did And the way I saw the world Guys come and go But friends last a lifetime We've been through soo much Through such a short time No matter the time No matter the day I know no matter what I can always look your way I find it impossible To ever forget or hide Someone who has done soo much Who has always been by my side One day we will go And part to left and right But I know you'll always remain In my heart tucked in tight We have shared soo much pain And soo many tears We've shared so many laughs In only a few years The future can try to split us But it will take many tries Before we're gone for good For we're bound like sisters... in disguise.

poetandknowit 22-Nov-02/5:53 PM
How do you get by in school writing like this? You are raping the English language. That is a crime. Pimple poems by 15 year olds are also a crime. Burn this at once or I am going to have someone call the FBI. As for the other comment: You were a foolish to make it and it basically showed that you do not have a clue as to what you are talking about. And you do not have any idea of what friendship is. You need to experience it properly to understand how to write a poem about it. Stay awake in English class and practice your spelling.




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