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American Poem (Free verse) by ASTRO-GLIDE

Osama Bin Laden, your time is short; We'd rather you die, than come to court. Why are you hiding if it was in God's name? Your just a punk with a turban; a pathetic shame. I have a question, about your theory and laws; "How come you never die for the cause?" Is it because you're a coward who counts on others? Well, here in America, we stand by our brothers. As is usual, you failed in your mission; If you expected pure chaos, you can keep on wishing Americans are now focused and stronger than ever; Your death has become our next endeavor. What you tried to kill, doesn't live in our walls; It's not in buildings or shopping malls. If all of our structures came crashing down; It would still be there, safe and sound. Because pride and courage can't be destroyed; Even if the towers leave a deep void. But then our energy will focus on you; And you'll feel the wrath of the Red, White and Blue. So slither and hide like a snake in the grass; Because America's coming to kick your ass!!!

FantasticFreddy 22-Nov-02/4:21 AM
I have to agree with Mr Jones,this really is naive and unecessary,just a propaganda exercise to stir up support for your poetry.
A genuinely cliched attitude;I don't condone terrorist attacks in any way,but have you ever considered WHY the USA is hated so much by some countries?If you're going to start stirring up patriotism,at least try to balance it out, lets not forget what it can lead to.




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