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Emptiness (Free verse) by Jagang

The emptiness inside me, grows more and more each day. This loneliness I feel, will never go away. The pain in my heart, is begging for release. One slash with a knife, and all my pain could cease. Should that be the way to go, a knife blade through my vein? Or should I try to find a gun, and put a bullet in my brain? It doesn't really matter, nothing ever does. No one will even remember, the person that I was. I lift my arm, and make a fist. I draw the knife, and slash my wrist.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Nov-02/12:32 PM
Also, a) it's not a slash, it's a more of a gouge, and b) almost nobody has the willpower to gouge their arm deeply enough to cause enough bleeding. So stop writing fucking shit suicide poetry until you actually know how to do it.




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