poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Night-mare by INTRANSIT.

ecargo20 Nov 2002

I'm not getting the story--what was the contradiction? And the romance?

Howsabout:
The target window closes
slowly, and she feels sexy
in Victoria's secret.
Tonight she slips
into satin and tears.

Looking at it sideways--umm, I dunno. My line breaks are very literal. It's my gift and my curse.