Replying to a comment on:

Night-mare (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

It used to be her and Contradiction. Then there was Romance. A window in time is closing and she feels sexy in Victorias secret. Tonight, she slips into satin and tears.

ecargo 20-Nov-02/8:46 PM
I'm not getting the story--what was the contradiction? And the romance?

Howsabout:
The target window closes
slowly, and she feels sexy
in Victoria's secret.
Tonight she slips
into satin and tears.

Looking at it sideways--umm, I dunno. My line breaks are very literal. It's my gift and my curse.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001