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Night-mare (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

It used to be her and Contradiction. Then there was Romance. A window in time is closing and she feels sexy in Victorias secret. Tonight, she slips into satin and tears.

<~> 20-Nov-02/8:20 PM
this feels like clumsily-aimed cruelty. perhaps you will say it is brutal honesty, with a modicum of compassion. but i don't feel it. it is outside of you, and you are trying too hard to get in. false.




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