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Spring Haiku (Haiku) by Staika

You tear at my eyes like a heron spearing fish in the cold spring dusk

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-May-02/5:26 AM
Nice one! I love the use of the words "spring" and "dusk". I've never seen those in a poem before!




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