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In Vein (Free verse) by nentwined

enough with this self-dejection infection of lethargy melancholic YELLOW cholera dyspeptic -- I need an injection of that WATERCOLOR life with supranormal pigmentation of all the hues of the imagination; enough with this pragmatic fragmentation -- give me poetry (set me free to wander my veins) as it rains PURPLE ideas (to hurl exuberance) let me be (let me see) set me free!

markb 22-May-02/12:41 AM
watercolor just leaped out at me. Really liked the second two stanzas. Something about the first didn't work for me.




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