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i dunno (Free verse) by New Life Drug

I have found I have nothing to write about not one drop of poetic essence dripping from my mind unto my lazy fingers. Drip, drip, the saliva coats my sour tongue I taste the candy oh yum yum I have found not one step towards lines of beauty waltzing through my foggy eyes Waltz, waltz, my feet must walk I think i'll go to the movies to stand in line to be continued

ThreeLittleBears 1-Nov-02/8:32 PM
You open up with 'I have nothing to write about' then continue with some really interesting lines. I'd rank this much higher if you got rid of the first lines and took off with the rest in another direction.




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