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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya

inspiration to be aquired, no other drug can take you higher... peace of mind when sound asleep, the dier need for one more release... can you help me eye'm begging, please eye'll do anything eye'll get down on my knees... this feeling inside eye'm trying to hide, if eye let it out will the pain subside? just one more fix... then eye'll try. (eye dont really know where this one came from...well...my mind of course, but eye dont know what eye was thinking about when eye wrote it.. .it isnt formatted right...eye think...but then eye was never really good in english)

Tintagiles 29-Oct-02/7:32 PM
Sheer claptrap. You are not unique, you are pretentious. Spelling it 'eye' merely makes you look like an imbecile, unless you're a poetic genius a la cummings, who could get away with it. The problem is that the poem is nowhere near a quality that will make people regard you as a genius making himself look special: rather, you look like either an illiterate fool or, worse yet, an illiterate fool trying to excuse his bad spelling by saying it makes him special.




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