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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya

inspiration to be aquired, no other drug can take you higher... peace of mind when sound asleep, the dier need for one more release... can you help me eye'm begging, please eye'll do anything eye'll get down on my knees... this feeling inside eye'm trying to hide, if eye let it out will the pain subside? just one more fix... then eye'll try. (eye dont really know where this one came from...well...my mind of course, but eye dont know what eye was thinking about when eye wrote it.. .it isnt formatted right...eye think...but then eye was never really good in english)

logun2002ya 29-Oct-02/5:03 PM
that is the most contrite and obvious critisism and it is usaually a sign...eye can see inside your mind, and loosers never fail...it doesn't matter how it's written, it doesnt matter what eye say, a good poet feels his heart and uses words to push his sway...obviously you try to be just like everyone else...me eye am unique...you should try it sometime




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