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Hve you ever..... v2 (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Have you ever driven through a downpour, and inches of standing water? Or through a snowstorm that made everything invisible? Or in a traffic jam that made you clutch till you were sore? If you have, then I welcome you, to the top of the cliff. And you may descend into the widening valley below. You will drive into the sun and be greeted by the hawk. You will drive into the moon and be chased by the mice... For you are home now. And your journey is just beginning.

<~> 29-Oct-02/12:25 PM
the problem with this one is that it tells. i have no issue with a good bitch session now and again, and you've certainly earned one, but this one comes across as a litany of complaints about soul-shattering vignettes that are written off as unimportant. it spells everything out. it says, 'do i *have* to' or 'when are we going to *be* there'? it's whiny when you want it to be lonely. that's my take.




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