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#7 (Haiku) by mikejedw

Heavy morning mist inhaled, beading on my arms-- not rain, not a cloud.

zapevaj 21-May-02/1:22 AM
Hm. "Inhaled" seems to read as either two or three syllables, probably depending on regional accent (I read it as two, but geo. regions with slower speech patterns or more dipthongs/twang will read it as three.)




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