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Icon (Free verse) by timfowler

I see a picture behind glass: silvered sheet halo, eyes raging indigo and kindling fires that catch the falling angel, wings failing, spun air and gold. I feel the artist's hand exposed in tiny details: lives and faces, forgotten faces in distant crowds. Touches of illuminating flame bring a second's grace, floating. I believe there is light concealed trapped by pigment, egg-bound colouring the image, the purity of mother and child made a lie, mere creation, flesh and wood.

zapevaj 21-May-02/1:15 AM
I hate to repeat myself, but the last two lines don't seem to carry through the theme, but introduce two entirely new ones (purity, mother and child) that aren't explored very much. It feels like a sudden change of direction right before the end.




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