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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya

inspiration to be aquired, no other drug can take you higher... peace of mind when sound asleep, the dier need for one more release... can you help me eye'm begging, please eye'll do anything eye'll get down on my knees... this feeling inside eye'm trying to hide, if eye let it out will the pain subside? just one more fix... then eye'll try. (eye dont really know where this one came from...well...my mind of course, but eye dont know what eye was thinking about when eye wrote it.. .it isnt formatted right...eye think...but then eye was never really good in english)

Tintagiles 28-Oct-02/8:00 PM
Quite obvious you were never good in English. I'll let you in on a secret: 'I', as in the pronoun that means 'me', is spelt 'I', not 'eye'. 'Eye' is your eye, as in the gooey thing stuck in your skull you use to see. Much quicker to just write 'I'.




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