Replying to a comment on:

wax (Free verse) by New Life Drug

wax is so cool when it is in your hands why is the red moldable cover so neat? It seals the cheese, and is left for formation A dinosaur, a pacman. Made. You show the creation to your master and I laugh at you, slave of slave Then Gina crushes your masterpiece She longs to rebuild something better Working to make a flying dinosaur and all this time I stand with cool bright eyes Staring at the wax and at people's eyebrows Wax is so cool not like my eyes, but like a joke

Tascobar 28-Oct-02/4:20 AM
Strange - this doesn't make any kind of sense whatsoever. Would indeed be better for the loss of the last line. 3.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001