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untitled2 (Free verse) by ThreeFourSix

a lust for all, is a must for some, and when lust is must, the trust is none.

-=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/6:55 PM
not clever enough to work. Unless one "gets it" as soon as they read it, you can assume you haven't been clear enough. Why not "and when lust is a must / trust turns to dust"? Granted it's a bit of a cliche but it's a silly poem.




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