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Emptiness (Free verse) by Jagang

The emptiness inside me, grows more and more each day. This loneliness I feel, will never go away. The pain in my heart, is begging for release. One slash with a knife, and all my pain could cease. Should that be the way to go, a knife blade through my vein? Or should I try to find a gun, and put a bullet in my brain? It doesn't really matter, nothing ever does. No one will even remember, the person that I was. I lift my arm, and make a fist. I draw the knife, and slash my wrist.

Tintagiles 22-Oct-02/11:55 AM
If you slash your wrist, you generally die, unless you are treated. You are alive. Ergo, you did not slash your wrist. Or if you did, you didn't really mean it. Ergo, you are a whiny bastard.




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