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Birth (Haiku) by nentwined

warm evelopement nurturing bath, burning love ends with explosion

anonymous 19-May-02/1:30 AM
too "eventful" to be a haiku really, the haiku is like the nut of one moment seen and cracked gently. also dunno if its accurate .. birth only explosive in certain circs.. water birth not, the essence is being "unwrapped" being exposed to whatever it iS that is prepared on the outside. like a poem really




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