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Cancer Haikus (Free verse) by poetandknowit

#20 i asked you to fight until i learned to pronounce the thing killing you #26 if these cells knew you would they keep pushing forward or apologize #31 four in the morning i miss the hospital food and the nurse's smile #40 morphine takes your pain so much left to say to you please, do not go yet #50 sometime in the night just as i walked through the door the embalmer called

poetandknowit 19-Oct-02/7:21 PM
Please, give me the 15 year old prespective of this issue. Tell me, in this limited context, should I have been more dramatic, or simply let the actions that occur speak for themselves? From the perspective of a POA it might be a different situation, you know. Please, enlighten me on what the experience of this is truly like. These all came from a dream. There are now 100 of them and this is only a sampling. But your input would be most helpful since it it plainly obvious that I haven't a clue as to what I am talking about.




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