poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on I am Cuba by cacophony.

cacophony17 Oct 2002

Thanks for your comments (Christof also). You are of course right. The last 4 lines were originally 8 which I didn't like so re-did just before I posted. On the spur of the moment I was quite pleased with myself but in the harsh light of day I can see that it doesn't work all that well.