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Snow-White (Free verse) by vulcan

They cannot make me smile,these baleful balls of snow Though they've made me a snowman Of swelling red nose,wrapped up in a gown of Sorrow. As still as Death that speaks not but overwhelms I move on like a ghost embracing the Night. Through the howling storm and the White-Cloaks'scowl I walk on with my Soul And a murmur now unsound "O my unconquerable Sole!"

<~> 14-Oct-02/9:03 AM
jesus, vulcan, it just doesn't work like that. it's too archaic sounding, and doesn't come off that way at all. sorry.




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