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Daniela (Free verse) by little_angel_maria

Oh Daniela you've let me down, you're shite as a best friend , so what if I smoked, that's nothing to do with what your dad did to me. You're a really shite best friend you know. You told the court lies about me and also said my personal life,just to hide the fact of what your dad has done to me. Daniela I loved you, treated you, cared for you, But now all I have to say is fuck you!!

Tascobar 14-Oct-02/4:50 AM
Hmmm. Hints at a dark experience, although sadly for you it is not conveyed well at all. I conclude that this is one of two things: a)the nonsensical ramblings of a moron or b) simply a bad, bad poem. 2/10.




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