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A poets call to arms (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Poets! Arise! Take up sword and shield and address those closest you. Go into the dead! Shake them awake and make them ask "why". Stab at their funny bone! Humor them and tickle their feet and tongue. Knock them asunder! Kick their shins and heads and roll them in verbage. Cut them in half! Grab their hearts in one hand, stomachs in t'other and show them themselves. Once you have done this, tend to them and nurture them and create an army.....

god'swife 13-Oct-02/10:03 PM
I posted what i thought was a funny and well written commit, but then I submitted it under Horus8. I deleted the comment and now I can't come up with anything clever. I feel bad. I like being funny. I don't want a dead army. I don't understand your metaphor. Tickling the dead sounds gross. I don't want to do it.




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