jsab7813 Oct 2002

If ignorance is bliss, you must be in heaven. Instead of looking at other people's work and being crude and judgemental, you should think about your own language. You prefer to use "big words" to make your work more appealing. I don't. I get to the point. I do it sweet and simple for a more simplistic target audience. We don't live in a world of genius' which is obvious from reading your posts. Poem ranker is not a place for you to vent your anger towards other people. If you would like to send constructive criticism, consider what you're reading. Think about who these works are geared towards and that not everyone is like you. You probably do approve of racism. You obviously aren't intelligent enough to put actual corrections or suggestions with regard to any of my work so you babble about subject matter that isn't original. Like being dark and deep is so original. I apologize, I'm only human. I can never be the next Marilyn Manson fan who sits behind my computer wearing black lipstick and writing pointless commentaries on the internet. By the way, "f** me!" I think you should go f** yourself or get a book on modern English compositions. Then let me know what you think. While you're at it, read up on marketing.