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Dilemma of a Crip (Free verse) by Ninoy_Instigator

What am I to do. Gangbangers, busters, and killers We were a ruthless gang They are a living remnant of my past Back in the day, when I was a thriller. We were the Crips, the toughest gang No need to be discrete Pistols sounded every week I would fight without worry I'd spit in the name of the street Domain was most important The human ego is morbid If you saw a blood member Or a non-crip C-Walkin' He was as good as dead But I have a huge dilemma, Towards Crips, people have anger I have something more important Someone I care about I can't put my baby in danger. I must abandon my old friends They mean nothing but trouble The streets are polluted Enemies seem tougher Gangbangin' is forever a struggle.

Ninoy_Instigator 9-Oct-02/8:59 PM
I know, I know, I have just been under a lot of pressure from my other poem. I don't know why everyone hates me so much for it. The force of the poem has nothing to do with hate, it is all love, but it brought up so much damn tension. Do you think my poems are too soft. I'm not used to this mushy stuff.




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