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Trembling Worry (Free verse) by Ninoy_Instigator

It is such hell out there. Who are all these guys? They're attacking my loved one With threats of flirting and lies. There goes another one. Apparently he knows her from school. But thank God, my baby doesn't budge. She doesn't fall for scum labelled 'cool'. My country is filled with these punks They all flirt with funny talk. But I want my girl to love me for real. I won't act like something I'm not. My friends know who I am, I don't need to impress them. I don't want the popular blonde bimbo, They are the sluts that I condemn. My beloved is quiet, pure, and honest. A Filipina girl with an innocent face. But God I can't take it much longer, there are dangerous threats all over the place. I see guys who are spoiled brats They never lifted a finger to do work. They were raised on dirty thoughts and sex. Now they're attacking her, please God it better not work. I have to refortify my defenses She is definitely not safe. I have to build up my love So other guys have no chance to chase. My dear beloved, You don't know it right now but I want to protect you throughout my life. And when you read this, take it as a proposal because I want you to be my wife.

god'swife 8-Oct-02/7:50 PM
I immediately take no stereotypes. You are jumpimg to conclusions. The poem you're referring to does not state that all muslims are evil. first of all I don't even believe in evil. Second of all I am the least prejudice person you will ever have the luck to run in to. I love the poem because of it's structure and it's satire on this whole terrorist nonsense. You take yourself too seriously. Stop making a jackass of yourself. The world is full of viewpoints. Learn how to handle yourself like an adult. What kind of stereotype am I? you know nothing about me, my life-style, or my beliefs. I am everything you third-worlders wish all Americans would be. you owe me an apology.




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