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Forever in love (Free verse) by devina

I remember the first time I saw you. I couldn't see to get mye eyes of you. I fell in love with you. The more I saw you and the more we talked, I fell more and more in love with you. You were in my head, in my dreams and in my heart. Maybe you didn't notice, but you stole my heart and kept it. Now it belongs to you....

vulcan 8-Oct-02/4:19 AM
too personal!(so I can not say wether i like it or not)not any poetic attempt to heighten feelings.




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