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Trembling Worry (Free verse) by Ninoy_Instigator

It is such hell out there. Who are all these guys? They're attacking my loved one With threats of flirting and lies. There goes another one. Apparently he knows her from school. But thank God, my baby doesn't budge. She doesn't fall for scum labelled 'cool'. My country is filled with these punks They all flirt with funny talk. But I want my girl to love me for real. I won't act like something I'm not. My friends know who I am, I don't need to impress them. I don't want the popular blonde bimbo, They are the sluts that I condemn. My beloved is quiet, pure, and honest. A Filipina girl with an innocent face. But God I can't take it much longer, there are dangerous threats all over the place. I see guys who are spoiled brats They never lifted a finger to do work. They were raised on dirty thoughts and sex. Now they're attacking her, please God it better not work. I have to refortify my defenses She is definitely not safe. I have to build up my love So other guys have no chance to chase. My dear beloved, You don't know it right now but I want to protect you throughout my life. And when you read this, take it as a proposal because I want you to be my wife.

Ninoy_Instigator 7-Oct-02/8:19 PM
Thank you for your comments, and public, I have a retraction to make. I did not mean that blondes are sluts. What I meant was that I don't want to submit and pant over the same stereotypical girls that my friends pant over immediately. I'm so sorry for anyone who took offense.




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