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Pigeons at the end of winter (Lyric) by mikejedw

Their molt is snowing from the brownstone ledge when, suddenly, they burst against the air and flutter into this week's milder wind. The flock of fat gray birds are thunder clouds; their wings, in chorus, like an echoed storm.

Dark Angle 5-Oct-02/1:39 AM
hmm, i wish this sort of poetry interested me so i could praise this poem, but i do not connect, sorry, the porn star sonnet was a slam dunk though




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