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#17 (Haiku) by mikejedw

Gentle autumn sun detracts from the horizon's flickering cloud bank.

Nicholas Jones 4-Oct-02/6:41 AM
I can see a flickering cloud bank out of my window, also in autumn sunshine. This poem speaks to me. Normally, I don't like the haiku form, but this is very visual and evocative.




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