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always the end to this good night (Free verse) by nentwined

always the end to this good night looms distant and despair is anon and again round the bend coming hence always the end to this good night looms far come the eyes try to shut try to close and give in always the end to this good night looms nearer and its jaws around your neck you can feel dripping sweat but always the end to this good night looms past and its jaws are but ash as the dawn comes to play and always the end to this good night looms gone and the day to this night shakes its head and bids adieu.

nentwined 1-Oct-02/12:33 AM
where? hmm. I've been wholly uncreative is all, woefully inadequate to any task beyond the methodical. (sorry, this, that, er, too much! -- this is a wholly and willfully self-induced bout of insomnia to work on one project that needed working on with whole-hearted abandon... which I am mostly doing. But a side effect of this "insomnia" is that in this waking period I've written FIVE poems (four amusingly doggerel haiku, and this oddly interesting piece, all of course centered around sleep deprivation and the like)... and I'm actually writing a piece of fiction for a contest (due half an hour ago, but since I"m the one who posts them.... la la la). anyway, I need to apologize for the hirsute prose... it's the nature of the character I'm writing as and I'm a bit stuck. la. I guess that's all?




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