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Pigeons at the end of winter (Lyric) by mikejedw

Their molt is snowing from the brownstone ledge when, suddenly, they burst against the air and flutter into this week's milder wind. The flock of fat gray birds are thunder clouds; their wings, in chorus, like an echoed storm.

anonymous 13-May-02/9:43 AM
The people who voted 3 for this poem are clearly idiots. Probably responsible for the most of the lame-ass juvenile shit on this site. At least this poem dealing with a tangible. I give it a 9. - Aduren




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