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Transfixed (#2) (Free verse) by Christof

A broken spine of cloud above me Barely winds across the sky, A sky so clear that space can see us Like a speck upon an eyeball. What wind there is Wraps your clothes against you The long grass moulds you in its cup. How definite you seem As you lean across me cross-wise And lower your face, and the broken spine Is fixed somewhere above Kilburn. I think how this transfixion must look from space.

INTRANSIT 27-Sep-02/4:08 AM
Since I've been on this site I've gotten better at studying others' work.This is really good. ditto.




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