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Taffy (Free verse) by knickytoy

We would begin with wishes. Bubbling up, as in boiling sugar; The hot, glossy bubbles of an unformed sweet, beautiful, but looking nothing like salt water taffy, Are pulled, broken, stretched and dulled, So dull they become reality And no one is really happy.

Lenore 24-Sep-02/8:22 PM
When I feel like that I go to York beach and ride the coaster,build sand castles and gorge myself on the peanut butter taffy made right there on the board walk. I come home feeling all shiny, and new again. Great poem! 10/10




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