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Hearts End (Free verse) by grrund
The sun sets in the west
A snow begins to fall quietly on the toad
White moon rises over the bird's nest
Ice develops unseen on the road
A car zooms through the night
A night that has never been like this
Clouds silver in their splendor
Tender like a lover's kiss
The ice turns black as Hades' sender
The car roars through the night's flurry
Your eyes on the night's first ray
Look at that precious white elm tree
Oh, what a beautiful end to a long day
Your thoughts on you and me
Ice and car interact with slipping design
Sights of metal bent around that white tree
Words of love left unsaid to you
Ice was too invisible for you to see
A hush comes with the morning dew
My heart's end.
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