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Married (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Do not build your spouse, for they came to you already assembled. Instead tether them, and fly them like a kite.

<~> 23-Sep-02/9:09 PM
i think the word 'tether' took it out of the realm of romance and deep love and into a more property-oriented schemata. which doesn't make sense with the kite-flying analogy. so, all in all, a thought-provoking poem.




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