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Friends (Free verse) by Ashley

Sit at home for 2-4 hours thinking its not fair and nothing matters With all the stuff running through your head All the mean stuff your friend had said you wish and wish it never happend it seemed like she was yelling latien. No matter how hard you sit and try you wish this time would just fly by you sit there crying on your bed saying lifes not fair you wish you were deid. You sit there waiting for the phone to ring for an apology or somthing ya sit there watching t/v/ hoping it makes you happy all it does is make you sad it reminds you of the fun times you have had you and your friends smiling free you sit and wounder what made you so happy then you remember the times that were sappy and forget the times you were so happy you take your time and wait and see and finally found what made you so happy it was love from friends and family even tho this poems done doesn't mean are friendship has ended it just made it stronger in the end.

INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/2:48 PM
I think you worked at this. Good feeling however you missed the flow.(Paddled too hard).7




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