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How Strange (Free verse) by T. Becquerel

I met a man once He wanted my words But didn?t say it; He yearned for them Without knowing. He made a noise, Perhaps it was his last cry, Perhaps his Typical emotional waterfall Had made him The messenger of Humanity. So I wrote my words On a piece of paper, Folded it, And began to hand it to him, But his arm Had already Been wrenched From his body.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-May-02/8:52 AM
Despite the awful "Typical emotional waterfall" line, you managed to save face with a wonderful ending.




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