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Tugboats (Free verse) by poetandknowit

The fish factory's stack spits thick steam, smothering air with smoke and the stink of baking snapper and salt water herring. Packing machines stifle waves spilling, painting sand smooth. Gulls splash for dogfish or starve or kill each other hovering above, waiting for disposal. I pull a half pint from my lunch bag. A tugboat guides a crab ship to port, preparing for a new shift. Men gather around the factory door, soundless - ragged flannels concealing pale bodies burning from boiler heat, stitched hands and scabbed fingers fresh from paring tables. Skin soaked with the stench of rot that never goes away. I sip whiskey as the morning horn screams. Night men file out defeated, bodies reflecting gold in the sun. My pop walks among them in slow rhythm with the machine beat, his face stone from sneaking booze at break time, eyes tired. When he reaches me he says nothing, just takes me in his arms - wet from his skin cleanses me, sweet liquor on his breath. Then he moves toward home as I follow the single line straight past the time clock, into the ocean.

poetandknowit 20-Sep-02/10:10 AM
Oh yes, your reason continues to show exactly how clever you are. It was not a joke and you know it. And the only people who might think this resembles something to laugh at are underdeveloped weasels. I am sure you and you canine friend fall into this category. Where exactly do you get patriotism out of this? Again, I will tell you what I told your friend. This has nothing to do with self-promotion on my part. I know I write well and have quite a successful career producing work that is my own. On this site, I am also well respected and I also realize this. Besides this is not about me, it is about your friend and now, I guess, you. What is funny and pathetic is that you defend him, because he surely cannot defend his own honor. Therefore, it is a question about self-respect. I have it. And you sir, have none.




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