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Tugboats (Free verse) by poetandknowit

The fish factory's stack spits thick steam, smothering air with smoke and the stink of baking snapper and salt water herring. Packing machines stifle waves spilling, painting sand smooth. Gulls splash for dogfish or starve or kill each other hovering above, waiting for disposal. I pull a half pint from my lunch bag. A tugboat guides a crab ship to port, preparing for a new shift. Men gather around the factory door, soundless - ragged flannels concealing pale bodies burning from boiler heat, stitched hands and scabbed fingers fresh from paring tables. Skin soaked with the stench of rot that never goes away. I sip whiskey as the morning horn screams. Night men file out defeated, bodies reflecting gold in the sun. My pop walks among them in slow rhythm with the machine beat, his face stone from sneaking booze at break time, eyes tired. When he reaches me he says nothing, just takes me in his arms - wet from his skin cleanses me, sweet liquor on his breath. Then he moves toward home as I follow the single line straight past the time clock, into the ocean.

poetandknowit 20-Sep-02/8:28 AM
bigbigdog: everyone on this site has the ability to read my 'about you" without out you wasting space in the comment box. At least you bothered to put quotation marks around it and did not claim it as your own writing. Why are you still on this site you stupid fuck? You are a plagiarist. The lowest of the low. Are you mad because I caught you, exposed you for the freak you are? Do you think coming to my poem and giving it a 0 is somehow going to assuage the ridicule I place upon you. Find another site. One full of teeny poopers and take your worthless self there.




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